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Something I drew; need feedback
Topic Started: Aug 31 2010, 06:34 PM (679 Views)
Agro
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Well, I drew something real quick, in 3 minutes. Now I want some feedback on how I can improve it.

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I know its awful, just trying to improve my drawing. I have a Graphics Novel class in school, and I NEED to get better drawing.

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Nemomon
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It is awful indeed, but considering Your age.. I only can suggest You drawing more. Check Your 2001th art, if it still will be awful or not.
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Dramz
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I agree with Nemo. Practice makes perfect.


Its still better than anything I can do though, lol.
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Jin
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wait is that guy in the picture Jaden Yuki?cause his hair is the same
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Nirvaxstiel
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yea, Looks like Yuki Juudai, but a sword? Juudai's not a fighter >_>
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Spyman exe
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Everything below the face is okay(except for one or twp problems), the face is what you need to work on. Don't make it so oval-like, make it more circular. The hair is hard to explain, so I will let a better person talk about that.
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Sylence Synonysis
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Ahh, I remember drawing like that at your age.
But just keep drawing and look at what other people draw. Pay attention on how they draw things like, proportions, eyes, head size, hair, etc. Unlike what other people tell you, try to imitate and copy them. But as you progress, branch off to your own style.

You'll improve as you go on.
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Midnite
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I'll let this necro post pass. This section needs some traffic.
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Megaboy08
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Improvement.

The sword is good though lol.
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StrikerGX
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It looks weird. I'm guessing the guy is wearing a shirt, but it's hard to tell. Also, is the sword actual size? I'm guessing not, but if it is, it looks just like a kunai!
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Nov 8 2010, 04:43 PM
Improvement.

The sword is good though lol.
Agreed and you might wanna draw the head circle or oval.You SERIOUSLY need improvement.
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Agro
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Ya. I suck as drawing, don't I? I don't want anymore people commenting on this awful drawing, unless you really want to get it out. XD
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GaiaEXE
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Come on You can do better than that I bet,Keep trying and you'll get better!
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