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Acid Ace BN sprite!
Topic Started: May 31 2010, 08:16 PM (2,639 Views)
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Since making a thread would make it more popular, I made one. Here is the Acid Ace BN sprite someone requested, I own it and whoever requested it owns none of it(sorry took awhile to make).
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Personally I think it is bad(I think the shading is waay off), but that's just my opinion.
Nice sprites, I want to see them in ACTION!

I'm probably gonna remake the sprite, but not the animation, if it is bad.
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Not perfect obviously. Shading is off and the structures on the back of the sprite a bit grainy- but this isn't your fault.

This sprite is incredibly hard to do. I've seen the greatest and most experienced of spriters, ones who have been spriting for years and have been around since Sprites INC was created, have trouble with Acid Ace. There is something just extremely difficult about him.

Therefore, what you've done is an awesome job- and kudos for not giving up.
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May 31 2010, 08:40 PM
Not perfect obviously. Shading is off and the structures on the back of the sprite a bit grainy- but this isn't your fault.

This sprite is incredibly hard to do. I've seen the greatest and most experienced of spriters, ones who have been spriting for years and have been around since Sprites INC was created, have trouble with Acid Ace. There is something just extremely difficult about him.

Therefore, what you've done is an awesome job- and kudos for not giving up.
So basically, your saying it's bad, but your not trying to make me feel bad? It's okay, I rushed on this sprite, and I know i messed up on the shading, because I rushed. I was a little lazy with this spite, until I realized this sprite had potential. So I tried my best to make it good, but apparently it didn't work. I've also scoured Sprites Inc, and I've seen no one try this.
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I didn't say its bad. Just not perfect, as you said. What you said is bad is basically the only real problem. Keep trying.

Also, the spriters I mean, such as Manson of the now-dead UnderSquare, showed me their projects personally and they couldn't even do the first frame. They didn't post them on INC because they were incomplete. I just said they were FROM INC back when it was first started as an emphasis on their experience, not posted them there.

EDIT: If you say that you rushed the sprite, you could probably do a much better job. You should re-make it like you said, that'll be interesting.
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I've seen Manson's half finished sprite, I looked at it for how to do some parts, but it didn't help, so I did this sprite all by my self.
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Yeah, that's what I mean. There's just something that's difficult in the design and hard to make perfect.
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If I do remake, I'm only gonna fix the shading, and the L shaped thing on the back. Maybe I might even fix the animations. I'm not gonna fix the torso, because it looks pretty good.
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Yeah. As stated, those are the only real problems. The rest is good.
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Okay, I realized this is pretty good than, time to get fixing!
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Wow Acid Ace in the flesh, he looks awesome but a little wierd at the same time.
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Your problem is still proportions, his head and body armor are humongous! Here's an OCW scan of his profile for some help. http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr78/MidniteW/acidace_.jpg

Manson was doing right to begin with Ace's long legs and smaller top. Yours makes him look clumsy.
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I think it looks bad right now, need to fix
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@Midnite: Yeah, I rushed on this sprite, so I didn't really do the proportions.

@Brianuuu: I'm gonna redo it, don't worry.
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I think you should observe the BN sprite style a little more. The palette, perspective, and shading needs to be improved.
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Thanks spyman, I'm glad you didn't forget :D
Though its a bit...off, redoing would be a good idea, and LOL at holes in SFMegaman
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I think you should observe the BN sprite style a little more. The palette, perspective, and shading needs to be improved.
You'd think that's common knowledge... Also, don't rush for an important character sprite. Manson spent hours getting where he's at. Same as I when I did Grave Joker.
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His head... needs work. O.o
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No offence, but I laughed a bit. But good work.
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Thanks, I'll start the remake not real soon, because I get lazy when school ends.
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Yes. And in those eventless last days, practice your sprite on paper. Sketch what you want it to look like and keep that idea in mind.
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