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Click on the spoiler box(es) to read the chapter.

Chapter 1


Rate and Rant. Give advices and last thing... Enjoy!

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Chapter 2 Wild Shock


I wish someone replied to this thread T_T
Edited by Aizirk Mayune, May 25 2010, 06:37 PM.

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I read the first one and it was pretty good, it's just a bit confusing trying to figure who's on who's side.
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When I remove the "<name> said.", it means that it's the same person talking, and the next sentence, it's the next person talking to the same person. Adding it would be kinda repetitive.

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I meant it's hard to figure out who''s the bad guys and who's the good guys, but I think I figured it out.
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Oh lol.

Anyway, Chapter 3 will be posted later night (GMT +8)... As usual.

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Read chapter 2, this is the first fanfic I've read before anyway. Also it was quite obvious the mysterious girl of chapter one was you, and you owned Edgeman. It would really help if I could see a picture of these navis though.
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The Navis didn't have much design yet, since I always think of the designs every time when I went to sleep myself since I don't think much anything else.
Edgeman's design is finished, but I haven't colored it, yet.

Chapter 3 will be posted tomorrow or later night (GMT+ 8), I'm lazy...
Ohoho, being the lazy arse I am, I will post Chapter 3 tomorrow morning or afternoon.
Edited by Aizirk Mayune, May 28 2010, 08:52 AM.

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I can't wait, I'm guessing Chapter 3 will have another battle between Edgeman and Shockman.
[offtop]Everytime I read Edgeman, it looks like Edgeworth.[/offtop]
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After Chapter 5, I will make a Bonus Chapter that will not be mentioned in the Main Chapters, for clarity, lol.

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After Chapter 5, I will make a Bonus Chapter that will not be mentioned in the Main Chapters, for clarity, lol.
That's if you post/make Chapters 3-5 first. >_<
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LOL Yeah. But it's the time I give up on mentioning dates it will be posted, damn.
I couldn't think much more and I had my hands on O2Jam all afternoon.

So it only depends my lazyness if I could post more Chapters faster.

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Chapter 3 Flaming Inferno


This is what I made so far =/
Edited by Aizirk Mayune, May 29 2010, 04:46 AM.

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Chapter 3 was pretty short, compared to the other chapters, well whatever. Anyway, I don't understand is Inferno a good guy or a bad guy(before chapter 3)?
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He's a good guy actually, when the bad guys plan to convert him to be one of them, (Because they are short of their teams. And I don't like the idea of "The Leader" reviving old Navis after old Navis since they get repetitive after it gets interesting.) he's a bad guy now.

Actually, this fan-fic is just a script of my fan-game, and I decided to alter many things so that what happens to this Fic, and in the Fan-Game, won't be the same.

I will revamp Chapter 3 when I get time, I'm still designing hard on the new Navis (esp. Shockman and 2 "will be appeared")

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Fan game, that means you'll have images of these navis right?
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Ya, but not now, since I only designed 3, which will be Edgeman, Crossman and Inferno, and the remaining new Navis still didn't have designs.

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Could I have a sneak preview, or is it supposed to be top secret?
[rbw][offtop]4 more posts!!!!!![/offtop][/rbw]
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Not really a top secret, but I need to revamp some others and I only had some references and some beta drawing on some parts.

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May I see the drawings, I really anxious to see what the Navis looks like, perhaps I might even sprite one :D .
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I made:

Edgeman (Rants: I need to revise his helmet, since when in front view, it couldn't get any weirder.)
- I was originally intending Edgeman had separate (Left and Right, not Front only.) eyes, for no reason at all, maybe uniqueness? But instead I dropped that idea myself.
Crossman (Rants: Nothing.)
- As I planned that Crossman should have two swords on both of his arms, while I was thinking, I planned on his design that he should have swords on top of his arms and hands, but the idea wasn't that good, instead his sword appears ON his hands rather than on TOP of his hands.
Shockman (Rants: Needed more design.)
- He was originally intended to be a vehicle Transforming Navi.
Inferno (Rants: Two words: Body Design)
- Umm... No comment?

Their drawings isn't colored yet, sadly.
Edited by Aizirk Mayune, Jun 7 2010, 04:16 AM.

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