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my attempt on black ace AND red joker
Topic Started: Mar 5 2010, 08:05 PM (1,400 Views)
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Well tell me what you guys think tell me what to change if u think it looks wrong :)
Comparison 1st one is lighter 2nd 1 is darker which 1 is better :)

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Heres first attempt of red joker not as good as black ace imo k 2nd 1 is the one with different angle
Edited by Kevinislol, Mar 9 2010, 09:57 PM.
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Pretty nice looking, megabusterzero made one before, I haven't seen him around though, it looks like it could be a bit darker
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Mar 5 2010, 10:02 PM
Pretty nice looking, megabusterzero made one before, I haven't seen him around though, it looks like it could be a bit darker
It should be more dark, use the colors from the wing. Anyway this is pretty good.
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Mar 5 2010, 10:11 PM
It should be more dark, use the colors from the wing. Anyway this is pretty good.
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ok so i should take the colors from the wing and put it on the body/head rite spyman?
Edit:ok so i darkened it and left first 1 which is better?
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Mar 5 2010, 10:22 PM
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It should be more dark, use the colors from the wing. Anyway this is pretty good.
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ok so i should take the colors from the wing and put it on the body/head rite spyman?
Edit:ok so i darkened it and left first 1 which is better?

The new one is much better, also I can't really judge the red joker, I've never played that game, I've only played Black Ace.
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yeah i have 2 agree i havnt played red joker only see pictures and black ace does look good darker :0
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Hmm... Just like everyone said, Black Ace needs to be darkened.

And the Red Joker's thingy on his head... (dunno what to call) Its angle needs to be decreased for a bit.

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its good, but too much colour and bright
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which 1 i darkened the black ace though
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WOW OSSIM THATS the nicest BA and RJ sprites I ever seen.
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Mar 6 2010, 12:28 AM
Hmm... Just like everyone said, Black Ace needs to be darkened.

And the Red Joker's thingy on his head... (dunno what to call) Its angle needs to be decreased for a bit.
black ace needs 2 be darkened more? also what do you mean that U shaped thing on red joker?
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Can you guys tell me why does it need 2 be darkened more also what should i fix on red joker?
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Mar 6 2010, 10:24 PM
Can you guys tell me why does it need 2 be darkened more also what should i fix on red joker?
Just thinking... His ear and foot is supposed to be darker than that.

About Red Joker, the U thing's angle doesn't look fine IMO

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o ok ill darken the shade of grey on his foot and ear
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K still need 2 fix red joker any other advice 2 fix these sprites beside the U shape and the shade?
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I like yours a lot. To me they are better than megabusterbusterzero`s.
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hmm wut if i adjust it... may i hav permission to adjust it?
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Ahh which 1 red joker or black ace you can fix the red joker but just wondering which 1 u wanted 2 fix
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K guys i saw red jokers legs and should i make it a little bigger or is it good
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