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| Rockman's Super duper grand Slapstick adventure; Guest Star Apperance! You Name It! | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 6 2010, 07:46 PM (1,700 Views) | |
| Taurus Wizard | Jan 6 2010, 07:46 PM Post #1 |
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One Day... Megaman: One Day? ONE DAY? How many times was that used before? It's too generic and uninteresting! CHANGE IT NOW! Now, Now, Mr. Megaman, It's what popped in my head... *clears throat* Now then... Sawnik Just came up with a super-silly laudabe extreme idea for a Rockman fanfic... A Slapstick adventure! Megaman: SLAPSTICK ADVENTURE? Are you serious, Sawnik? Oh.. yes... I am serious... I'll be the best adve... Megaman: NO! Please, Less comical! More serious! Now then, This story starts off with the sun rising, the bluebirds chirping, and the ocean blah blah blah blah blah blah on a date with Roll... Megaman: Ohh... Your Face looks so.. Pretty.. And.. You.. Blah blah, Blah Blah Blah.. Roll: Blah, Blah Blah Blah? Megaman: Blah blah blah blah blah... Blah blah... Little did they know that they were walking right into teh most devious, dastardly trap I set up for them... A Baseball Stadium. Megaman: Blah.. Blah Blah Blah? Blllaaahhh... *bumps into man* Man: HEY! Get in the game or Get Out! Megaman: Yeah, Like I really care... Man: *strangles Megaman* Mega: Okay.. Okay... PLAY BALL! Mega: Hey Batter Batter Hey Batter Batter Swing! Roll: I've got to just do mah thing! Mega: Hey Battah Battah Hey Battah Battah SWING!... Roll: I'll show you that It's one of the same, Baseball Dancing same game, It's easy... Everyone: STEP UP TO THE PLAAATTTEEE... Roll: And.. SWING! *crack* Oh Noes! It's a lose ball! Iceman runs for It.. No No! It's Gutsman.. No, Iceman, WHAT's GOING ON? So... What happened? You decide. It must be silly though! Edited by Taurus Wizard, Jan 10 2010, 10:17 AM.
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| Saito | Jan 18 2010, 09:21 PM Post #2 |
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Fantastically random is the only phrase I can use to describe this. |
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| Taurus Wizard | Jan 21 2010, 01:14 PM Post #3 |
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I'm glad you like it... Anyways, back to where I left off! CHAPTER 1 : How to play baseball... Rockman's Way! It's Anyone's game now... Iceman throws it.. pelts Gutsman in the face... Throws it to west, back to Hannah, Hannah starts singing something stupid... NO! NO! Now it's Shadow X's ball... Shoots... *SMASH* OOhhh!!! He dusts the old one off for a smacker!... Rockman Gets a free walk to first base, then.... Rockman: My.. My pleasure..Mr. Umpire... *walks over like he's been shot* Now, Lan Hikari Steps Up To The Plate... Just in time for the airship to drop off robots for the other team!... Codename 11990 steps up to the pitchers mound... *wooshh* STRIKE ONE!... Woah, LOOK OUT! *strike two* LAN! LOOK OUT! THE BALL'S HEADING RIGHT FOR YOUR FACE!... I can't look... Lan: AHHHHHH!! *splat* Oh, What A Great Game this has been... W.. WHAT? It seems like Lan's head went boom... Yup, That robot killed him with a fastball! Rockman: That's Not Fair! One of your players have to die now! Woodman: Har, Har... What? You think so, huh? *match flys in from the crowd dropping stuff* AHH! MY HATS ON FIRE! HELP! *burns to a crisp* And That Evens Out Our Teams... Elecman Steps up to the plate.. *smack* OH! Looks like this ball's flying out of the park... Rockman: NOT IF I CAN HELP IT! TAXI! Gimme a ride! *pays 500 zenny* *taxi drives off to the statue of Liberty* *Rockman climbs the statue* Rockman: Here it comes... Any second now... *raises glove* *catches ball* *Umpire comes out from elevator* Umpire: Elecman! YOU'RE OUT! Elecman: Bu.. But.. Bu.. WHY! *** YOU ROCKMAN! Statue Of Liberty: That's what the man said, you! You're out!... Wait, Why am I talking again? Rockman: And That Makes us win... 1 to nothing!... Well Done, team. Let's go to the locker room... Roll: Rockman, What A great job you did! Rockman: Well, Coudn't have done it without your singing ability! Wanna Go For A Drive? Roll:Tee-Hee! Sure! *gets in car with rockman* Chapter 2 Will Come if this gets enough attention... |
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| Hakairyu | Jan 22 2010, 10:52 AM Post #4 |
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The name is Kidink. Coin Kidink.
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the name made me "slap-sick", intro was a bit amateur yet funny till the first line of roll, although the rest&episode either sucked or its because im not into baseball... nope, it sucked. Also, completely random. |
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Hakairyu: Why did the whale cross the road? ----------/ ---------\ -(\__/)/ (+'.'-/+) I was told to put this bunny in my sig. I did so, after putting a sword through it. (")_/(") ---/ HvK: To get to the other tide! I can haz Exclusive Star?
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| Taurus Wizard | Jan 30 2010, 10:59 AM Post #5 |
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Thanks For Noticing this... And Yes, I did this without any sort of scripting or plotting whatsoever... But then again, Randomidity is the point of this little... Do-hickey thing... So, I just said "BASEBALL" And that's what the first chapter was about. Now, Chapter 2 Is Upon us even though it's unfinishe, with 10% More randomidity! CHAPTER 2 The N1- Grand Flea... Or.. What Was It? Nah. It's got nothing to do with what you're thinking about. So, We see our beloved couple, Rock and Roll, just sittin in da car, showing us if they can get far... Which, they are going at an AMAZING, record-breaking speed of 0 MPH. Rockman: HEY! DIRECTOR! Get yer lazy butt over here and START CHAPTER 2 Allready! Me: Rockman! I allready started Chapter 2... Rockman: Uh? Oh yeah.. *cue happy-go lucky dating music here* So... Roll... How About I buy you dinner tonight? Roll: Oh, Rocky, anything for you mah love... Rockman: Well I'll be! *shoots a turkey far off in the background* *VRRROOOOMMMMM* Rock: Hey, What was that? *vrooom* It seems like there's a presence of some jackass going at about 500 MPH right now... *SCREEECHHHHH* *BOOOOMMMMM* Rockman: AHHHHH!!! HEY! GET BACK HERE YOU JERK! YOU STOLE MY WALLET! *starts running like little red riding hood* I'll catch you!! I'm going to get you... And.. I... I'm almost 1% of the way there... And.. I.. Aww... ******!!! 1 MONTH LATER Rockman: So.. This is where the little bandit left off to... This looks like something that would come from a stadium event... In fact.. this looks like an...*BANG* Rockman: AHHHHHH!!! HELP ME MOMMY! *flys off into the skyline and explodes* Rockman Turboman SCORE -1 SCORE +1 (hey, a smash bros reference!) *platform carrying rockman comes down to drop him off on his second life* Rockman: SO... This isn't madness, then! THIS IS.. SPART *cut off-prevention please stand by* Me: No! I wanna see what's going on! *adjusts TV antenna as the static dissapears* Ribbita: He..*fuzz* An *fuzz* Welcome to the N1- Grand Prix! I'm here to interview the competitors before our tourney begins... Please, Introduce yourself, Rockman... Rockman: WOW! What A hot chick! Roll: *smashes rockman on the head with a frying pan* ROOOOCKKK!! NO CHEATING! Rockman: Uh.. Yeah.. Sorry Roll... Ribbita: Well, It looks like Rockman's in for the time of his life! CHAPTER 2 TO BE CONTINUE |
![]() I love it, whatever it is. I don't care if it's a fart, If it's related to bulls, I'll love it. ~Sawnik | |
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| Dregs | Jan 30 2010, 11:52 PM Post #6 |
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Forgive me if i get too shy but maybe you're the reason why I love you.
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| louman7777777 | Feb 1 2010, 09:50 PM Post #7 |
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LOLZ So random and stupid in a funny way... |
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| Taurus Wizard | Feb 16 2010, 10:30 AM Post #8 |
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Louman, That's the entire point. The idea of this Unproffesinal FanFiccy is to have all of these stupid ideas pop up into my head, and then somehow tie them all together with Rockman. Chapter 2 Is going to be posted tonight. Okay, Bai nao. |
![]() I love it, whatever it is. I don't care if it's a fart, If it's related to bulls, I'll love it. ~Sawnik | |
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| louman7777777 | Feb 16 2010, 01:54 PM Post #9 |
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Yay! Can't wait for the next one. This is going to be fun! |
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| Taurus Wizard | Feb 17 2010, 06:59 AM Post #10 |
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Well, I'm late. Better late then never, eh? Anyways, Here's the rest of chapter 2. Ribbita: Welcome Back To The N1-Grand Prix! Let's take a peak into the garage to see what those racers are up to... So, Burnerman, What's your car's special Modifications? Burnerman: BURN! BURN! *sets engine on fire and engine revs up* Ribbita: So That's your strategy? Burnerman: BURN! *sets ribbita on fire with flames* Ribbita: Um.. Yeah. I can see that. *Racing crew dumps water all over ribbita* Ribbita :So, Roll.. What.. AHH! What's this? *card gets handed to her* Roll... Can't Race.. Due.. To Crapcom? I KNEW IT... I Wanted to see some hot girl action in this race, but CRAPCOM USA decided to injure her so she coudn't race! Damn! So, What Are You Doing For The Race, Rockman? Rockman: Uhh... I gots my Pumped up car? Ribbita: Sounds Good enough to me.. Toadman: Ribbita! I'm gonna do this for you! Ribbita: I'm glad.. So, Does Anyone want An Interview?? UHh.. Glyde?..Anyone?. Ah, Crap, It's race time.... Stay Tuned, Chaper 3 is on the way! |
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| HikariXSora | Feb 17 2010, 08:13 AM Post #11 |
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL thats very cool and funny, random at the same time. |
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| louman7777777 | Feb 18 2010, 11:03 AM Post #12 |
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That last one was too short ![]() Liked the baseball one the best still
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| Aizirk Mayune | Feb 20 2010, 06:25 AM Post #13 |
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To be honest, it's too funny XD But, there's wrong. I'll list of it so you can improve it. - Write in a story form, this way, you must describe what's happening or what the character is doing, if you're into a "camera view" (characters have thoughts for themselves and there's silence) than "point of view" (One character is a narrator and send some sarcastic comments on audience), do it, we doesn't care as long the randomity and sense is still present. - Never. Ever. Write. In. Script form. You're not dubbing a show, so it's better to write in story manner. - Don't use an *asterisk* when someone is doing something or how many times has passed. - And, don't use an *asterisk* to depict sound effects, use sentence like: "A sound of screech is heard until the depths of our minds" ...or something like that XD (May look like comical, but it's true) - Oh, one more thing, don't show characters out of nowhere as if everyone know where they came from, make it seem that they're surprised on one thing. These are the problems I encounter, please improve so we can have 2x enjoyment in this fanfic. Oh, BTW, don't be offended, I made this to make you improve, the same thing happened to me before, I don't know to make a fic, but know, I know now. I'll give a little example. (This story uses "point of view" (which is commonly known as "POV"), meaning, one character can send comments to audience and his/her thoughts can only be heard.) Example Put in spoiler for short post, I think... Although it seemed so random, a good fanfic makes it best. Although unproffesionality on writing makes it better, but the scripting seemed dull... IMO. *Remembers one fanfic with mentioning a genius-idiot character.* Overall, it was a good and humorous fanfic. "That robot killed him with a fastball!" Fastball? I think I remember something but different Anime... Oh wait, nevermind... XD *throws ball with super-speed with the inhuman abilities... or alien?* (Sorry for the pun, I remember something out of my head.) EDIT: I edited this many times! Last Edit. Fin. Edited by Aizirk Mayune, Feb 20 2010, 07:01 AM.
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| Taurus Wizard | Mar 9 2010, 12:54 PM Post #14 |
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Allright, Thanks for the advice Yuki! When I get around to Chapter 3, which I'm working on ideas for now, I'll take your words of wisdom into consideration. Also, I'll try animating Chapter 3 along with posting it just to see how it will turn out... Hey, At least I have SOMETHING for my youtube channel now! |
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| Aizirk Mayune | Mar 10 2010, 02:57 AM Post #15 |
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BTW, you don't need to edit your previous chapters, just stay as it is. Just make it better and make the hilarious yet enjoyable fan-fic
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| louman7777777 | Mar 11 2010, 10:56 AM Post #16 |
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oooh, animations, now i'm excited for it! and I like it better the way its already formated!
Edited by louman7777777, Mar 11 2010, 10:58 AM.
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| Taurus Wizard | Mar 11 2010, 01:22 PM Post #17 |
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Yes. I've decided to animate it since I thought It would be funnier to see this all play out in real time... It will take me some time, maybe 2 weeks, but It'll be worth it. |
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| Aizirk Mayune | Mar 12 2010, 07:17 AM Post #18 |
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So, you will animate the fic... FOR US TO UNDERSTAND THE SITUATION?! This is gotta be fun ![]() Although my imagination reaches the peak that I imagined the chapters more as I read further... |
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| SereFei | Mar 15 2010, 08:28 PM Post #19 |
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the story would be much greater when it is animated
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| Taurus Wizard | Mar 16 2010, 12:00 PM Post #20 |
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I know What you're thinking... But I want the fans involved in this as well. In My little N1-Grand Flea Racing Tourney, Who's going to be the guest star that appears in the race? You can name anyone, as long as it isn't inappropriate. Go on... You can pick anyone from any game! |
![]() I love it, whatever it is. I don't care if it's a fart, If it's related to bulls, I'll love it. ~Sawnik | |
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