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| Topic Started: May 8 2008, 07:10 PM (728 Views) | |
| Careno | May 8 2008, 07:10 PM Post #1 |
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![]() Just a random sprite. I know its horrible. Tips? Hints? Comments? |
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| Falken XL | May 8 2008, 07:11 PM Post #2 |
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Actually it's not bad at all. I give it a three...out of 5. (I like X-Play.) |
That matches me, plus dragons are my favorite type, let's see what kind of Dragon...![]() Cool. *completly forgets the subject and goes to do something else* | |
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| Kingofkingz750 | May 9 2008, 01:24 PM Post #3 |
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Oh god thats horrible, IT looks like a gray blob. Careno your place is GFX your a King in that area, stay there. |
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| Nemomon | May 9 2008, 01:30 PM Post #4 |
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Yep, i'll agree with KoK. That's bad and ugly. At least, You know that... |
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| WESKER2 | May 9 2008, 04:54 PM Post #5 |
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I have to say it looks....ok.(Not horrible but not all that good either). |
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| Careno | May 9 2008, 05:39 PM Post #6 |
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Falken XL: Thanks KoK; I'm not giving up. So anyone got any tips? |
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| WESKER2 | May 9 2008, 05:42 PM Post #7 |
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Well, personally, I like to see things that look like their in action, so maybe if you make him look like he's swinging that sword of his it would look a whole lot better. |
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| Falken XL | May 9 2008, 05:42 PM Post #8 |
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Um... Make it look... more visible. If you don't look really closely it looks like a gray blob with a sword. Try some different shades, try another color then gray. Anything to make it look... not like a piece of non-dry concrete. |
That matches me, plus dragons are my favorite type, let's see what kind of Dragon...![]() Cool. *completly forgets the subject and goes to do something else* | |
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| WESKER2 | May 9 2008, 05:44 PM Post #9 |
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Or you could also make it into many different colors like blue, red, even black may work. |
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| Careno | May 9 2008, 06:08 PM Post #10 |
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Well here's something I did yesterday. I think its alot better personally. Sniper Navi: (I appologize for all the white area, I forgot to cut it away) |
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| Falken XL | May 9 2008, 06:10 PM Post #11 |
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Alot better. |
That matches me, plus dragons are my favorite type, let's see what kind of Dragon...![]() Cool. *completly forgets the subject and goes to do something else* | |
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| WESKER2 | May 9 2008, 06:11 PM Post #12 |
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Yeah, way. But instead of cutting out the white spots you should fill them in with a cool background. Something like a battlefield or along those lines. |
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| Careno | May 10 2008, 07:37 PM Post #13 |
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Hows this? I call him Gelademan. His colors still need working on, but overall I like his design. |
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| DragonZero | May 10 2008, 08:01 PM Post #14 |
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Your first Sprite isn't horrible: it needs more Color so it doesn't look as Blobbish, and he's noticeably MegaMan-Based, so you may want to add more Parts to him and edit them a bit more. All in All, I'd say he gets about a... 4/10. Sniper Navi looks a bit more like a correction to the First Sprite, though he still looks recognizably like the Normal Navi, so he needs more Parts and/or editing. He gets about a 5/10... This new Guy looks alright. His Sword is a bit of an Odd shape, as it looks a bit more like a Flame, but the Boots are Custom and the Helmet (Though not very Practical), is original-looking. He could still use more editing, and his design is a tad plain in some spots (Chest Plate). I'd say this guy gets a 5.5/10. ...Which seems like a pretty steady increase. You're getting better with practice. By the way guys, telling someone their Sprites are Awful is no way to help them Improve. That will make them give up after long enough. You have to remember to point out Positives as well, so the Spriter doesn't become overwhelmed by Negative comments. |
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| Careno | May 12 2008, 10:35 AM Post #15 |
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DragonZero: The Sniper Navi is meant to be more of a mass produced navi, which I why I didn't edit him as much. He's not a custom navi like Rockman. As for Gelademan he uses a plasma like energy, which is why his sword is shaped like that. Thank you for your comment, it helps alot. Sprite: This is Corpse.exe, born from the remains of viruses and a navi. I acctually made this before Gelademan, it still has some areas that need fixing. |
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May 12 2008, 11:37 AM Post #16 |
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Corpse.exe is lookin pretty good Careno. I suggest working around the foot and chest area, they seem kinda bland. |
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| Mike900 | May 12 2008, 03:05 PM Post #17 |
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Could you make a sprite for me? 900.EXE Kinda Ninja like. Use some parts from Bass. Some from SparkMan. Just do what you can. |
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| Megaboy08 | May 13 2008, 03:21 PM Post #18 |
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i kinda like them but the last one it looks weird! but i like Gelademan
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