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Alright this is a story made by me, it's about megaman but after 50 years.

1st episode:The discovery

Introduction:50 years have passed since the LEGEND of megaman, it's now just a myth passed from father to son.
Characters:Carl, jason,mai,
Navis: Fastman,darla

-8:40 am
Jason:Cool, now is my favorite class, the defense against darkloids
mai:oh come on jason just because you've got a fast navi doesn't mean you are the strongest operator here.
Jason:What? everybody knows I'm invincible in net-battling
*mai leaves pissed*
Jason:oh here's stupid carl, what's up? can't jack in
*Carl's per was broken 2 months ago and his parents were having financial problems in getting a new one*
Carl:get away from me Jason
Jason:What's wrong? going to cry? perhaps you should buy a napkin, wait a sec. you don't have enough money *All class laughs except mai*

-After school
Mai:What you said jason was not good at all, it's mean and inconsiderate
Jason:He's a loser and anyways even when he had a navi he sucked in net-battling
mai:Boys are Boys, all you care about is fight and soccer

*In a dark alley at 4:00 pm*
Carl:I hate myself *Talking to himself*, why me? I just want one good working navi so that I could show this Jason what net-battling means.
*Suddenly Carl tripped in a strange little hook in the ground*
Carl:what's this?
*He pulled the hook and a secret door opened showing some stairs
Carl:ummm, maybe I should go away, but what's this place?
*Carl goes down*
Part 2:The dungeon
*A dark place with spider's webs and a lot of dust*
Carl:OMG, what's this place?
*Carl moves forward till he reached a spot with a dusty old box and light coming on it from a small electronic lamp, the box got a red button*
Carl:maybe I should really get away, I'm kinda scared
*But Carl pushed the red button*
*a strange muscular voice says*
Sound:Finder of the deeper dungeon, you shall be tested to see if you're worth of the great gift
Carl:the great gift?
Sound:You shall answer my question, What is egde yar atled?and where does it exist?
END EPISODE
Next:what's the great gift?

-If you want me to continue please tell me your opinions, also you will need to answer the voice's question
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Work on your spelling, I didn't understand most of it.
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Sorry, but what do you think about the whole idea?
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i liked it, but i think it should go in the creation's forum, because it's a story.
(btw can i copy this and fix the spelling, then i can pm it back to you, so you can re-post it)
anyway, good job!

ps, the question answer is "delta ray edge" spelled backwards.
it exists in protoman, or, in the multiplayer battles in bn3.
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It was O.K.
`@d-leeter: You weren't supposed to say that I guess.
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No no he's supposed to say that, I need an answer to continue the next episode

This new one is grammar corrected by d-leeter
1st episode:The discovery

Introduction: 50 years have passed since the legend of megaman. It's now just a myth passed from father to son.
Characters: Carl, Jason, Mai.
Navis: Fastman, Darla.

-8:40 am-
Jason: Cool, next is my favorite class, the defense against darkloids!
Mai: Oh come on jason, just because you've got a fast navi doesn't mean you are the strongest operator here.
Jason: What? everybody knows I'm invincible when it comes to net-battling!

*mai leaves pissed*

Jason: Here comes carl.....stupid. What's up? can't you jack in?
*Carl's "PET" has been broken for 2 months, and his parents were having financial problems so they couldn't get him a new one*

Carl: get away from me Jason.
Jason: What's wrong, going to cry? perhaps you should buy a napkin, wait a sec... you don't have enough money! *everyone on the class laughs, except mai*

-After school-

Mai: Jason, what you said was not good at all, it's mean and inconsiderate.
Jason: He's a loser, and anyways even when he had a navi he sucked at net-battling.
mai: Boys are Boys, all you care about is fighting and playing soccer.

*In a dark alley at 4:00 pm*
Carl: I hate myself... *Talking to himself*, Why me? I just wanted ONE good working navi so that I could show Jason what net-battling means.
*Suddenly, Carl tripped on a strange little hook in the ground*
Carl: what's this?
*He pulled the hook and a secret door opened, showing some stairs.*
Carl: ummm, maybe I should leave, but what is this place?
*Carl goes down....*


Part 2:The Dungeon

*A dark place with spider webs and a lot of dust*

Carl: OMG, what IS this place?
*Carl moves forward untill he reaches a spot with a dusty old box and light shining on it from a small electronic lamp. inside the box, there is a red button*
Carl: maybe I should really get away, I'm getting scared.
*Carl pushed the red button*
*a strange muscular voice says*
Strange voice: Finder of the deeper dungeon, you shall be tested to see if you're worthy of the great gift.
Carl: "The great gift"?
Sound: You shall answer my question, What is "egde yar atled"? and where is it?

-END EPISODE-
Next: What's the great gift?

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also, you will need to answer the voice's question.
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Episode 2:Slashing while dashing

*From the end of episode 1*
Carl:uhh, Delta ray Edge?
Voice:Finder of the deeper dungeon,you shall be given the Gift
Carl:Gift?
*The rusty Box opens* *A pet3 appears*
Carl:What? this is an old pet, pet 7 is going to be released next month
*Carl takes the Pet and activates it* *The pet is red colored *
*The pet views a navi with a tall, good body and a long grey hair appears*
The navi:What is this place? how did I get here?
Carl:Do you know who you are?
The navi:no, but I feel an enormous strength in my body.
Carl:well, you're in an old pet so you can't be this strong, don't you remember your name?
The navi:No,it's all too foggy for me, I can't remember
Carl:So would you like to be my navi? until you get your memory back
The navi:well you're forgetting I'm a program so I my memory must be saved in a place in the internet,but I will join you until I get my memory back.
Carl:cool, but what's your fighting ability?
The navi:I don't know I must practice first
Carl:Cool I'll call you Slasher
Slasher:Fine by me, let's go and practice
*At carl's home*
Carl:Initiating practice program
*Practice program Initiated*
Carl:Slasher you must cut all 3 moving targets in 10 seconds or less
Slasher:I'll try slot-in for me
Carl:Slot-In:Bamboo sword
*Slasher moves in a very fast speed and he cuts all 3 targets in 2.30 sec.
Carl:Wow,that's better than jason's record.
Slasher:Jason?
Carl:He's a guy who keeps pissing me off in school and keeps bothering me.
Slasher:Well someone is going to take a lesson in net-battling, right?
Carl:Yeah, let's do it

Next episode:Will slasher know anything about his past?, what will happen between Carl and Jason?Fast man and Slasher?

This episode question:Who is Serenade's "Operator"?
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nice, (and i'm just guessing that slasher is protoman, but i'm not sure.....)
anyway, the story looks good.
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Come on guys answer the question
@antifrost:You can answer the question here you don't have to P.M me but you were wrong.
Another hint:Check TUS
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Serenade's operator is Mamoru?

BTW, continue.
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Apr 20 2007, 01:40 PM
Check TUS

What's TUS?
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TUS is the undersquare www.exe-undersq.com/newforum it's probalbly the most know site for rockman, and your answer is right nemomon
Edit:and I'm wating for a certain person's oppinion in a P.M to know if I should add more episodes, I told him my full idea this morning and he didn't reply yet, hope he does soon.
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... wut?
How is that freaky wheelchair person his operator?
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A good question... :D
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ummm in Photobucket there's some photos for a symbol on Mamuro's chair and it's the same as Serenade's, ask d-leeter maybe he remember the Topic's name were the URL's were posted.
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ummm in Photobucket there's some photos for a symbol on Mamuro's chair and it's the same as Serenade's, ask d-leeter maybe he remember the Topic's name were the URL's were posted.

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You're sure that wasn't edited or coincidence?
Wait, wait, wait. He's too sick to Net battle, how does he fight you in the secret area?
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well i think so as mamoru is ther owner of teh undernet and serenade was the king so it must be that way
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Well all he needs to battle is a pet+ mamoru showed up to lan at the Secret area server
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i have proof, hold on.......
http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=normalmamoruvc4.jpg
http://img267.imageshack.us/my.php?image=n...enadeexexz5.jpg

here ya go.
they are the same (if you don't belive me, go to af, that where i got the pics.)
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Well this PERSON told me to go on so here it is

Episode 3

School 8:20 am
Jason:So mai, will you join me later after school
Mai:Get a life Jason, and pay attention to class this is important you know
Jason:I don't care, I'm a perfect net-battler and my father will take me to work in him company as his personal assistant
Carl:huff,huff. Mai did the lesson began yet?
Mai:Yes, now that's someone with a future
Jason:Carl? he's a loser and a n00b
Carl:Oh really? well I challenge you to a net-battle vs. Fastman
Jason:and you will borrow which navi?*Smiling*
Carl:None, I've got my own pet with my own navi*Showing the red pet)
Jason:This old pet? I bet your navi can't even walk
Carl:We'll see

After school.
In arcade
Carl:Jack in, Slasher.Execute
Jason:Jack in,Fastman.Execute
Fastman:heh,this guy with long hair? I promise you I will defeat him in a blink of an eye
Carl:Don't say promises you can't keep,Slasher.
Slasher:Yes sir,don't worry.

Ready,Set,Battle start

Fastman:Initiating Fast mode
*Fastman moves so quick that slasher can only feel the net-air coming from his running
Slasher:Pathetic, 143m-32/56m-45n=14n *Do the math,I can't)
*Slasher moves to the northwest*
Carl:Slot-in:Fire sword
SLASH
Fastman slows down rapidly
Fastman:How could you,... ah.
FASTMAN LOG OUT
Jason:WHAT?How could it be? me, the ultimate champ., I heven't lost from 13 weeks since the ACDC city tournament final
Carl:well the school got a new champ, nice work Slasher
Jason:Wait, you cheated. you slotted in the chip and it came to his hand in like.. a sec.
Carl:That's called good operating
*Leaves Jason to his shock*
Carl:Well slasher you did your part, now where should we start looking?
Slasher:We must get information from streets here.
Carl:Info. from streets? Got it, The BBS chatting section
Slasher:That's it, let's go
*After 15 minutes*
Slasher:Well here's the gate
Security:Wait, we must test you in order to see if you are qualified for the special square.
Slasher:Special square?
S.O:Yes, It's an improved square
Slasher:Well, what kind of test?
S.O:I'll ask you 3 questions and you answer
Slasher:O.K
S.O: 1st question:What is the total atk. of all sword chips found in BN5 and BN6 if they all hit(Including Giga and Mega)
2nd question:How many squares existed in the past?
3rd question:What is the total atk. of all ANBOL chips found in the make your own giga chip topic in TUS?"It's in the Rockman Forum"
To be Continued
Next episode:What will slasher see in the BBS?Will there be any kind of connection between Slasher and previous MM Legends?
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